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This guide lays out writing a proposal for a Bravo Fleet fiction, as per the [[Canon Policy#Section 4 - Fiction|Canon Policy]]. Please note that is not relevant for requesting a primary command, which any member can automatically request upon reaching the rank of Lieutenant Commander. Nor is this relevant for an additional 25th-century Starfleet ship, which members can request under the [[Command Policy#3 - Squadrons|squadron system]] upon reaching the rank of Captain. This guide is for requesting a fiction about a ''non-Starfleet'' story in the 25th century, ''or'' a fiction set in a different era of Trek canon. Members are eligible for these fictions from the rank of Commander.
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| image =[[File:Watchtower.jpg]]  
| registry = DS-108
| class = Watchtower
| affiliation = Starfleet
| status = Active
| commissioned =2293
| decommissioned =
| destroyed =
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| sector =
| region =
| quadrant = [[Beta Quadrant]]
| role =Diplomatic Outreach
| unit =
| taskforce =Task Force 47
| taskgroup =Task Group 13
| squadron =
| co =[[bfms_char:71721|Captain Elena Mitchell]]
| xo =[[bfms_char:69732|Commander William "Gab" Harris]]  
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{{quote|I had my choice of any job in the fleet. I didn’t want some cushy job …I wanted this. The farthest reaches of the galaxy. One of the most remote outposts available. This is where the adventure is. This is where heroes are made. Right here… in the wilderness.|'''Julian Bashir''', 2369}}


Please note that while a small civilian ship - a non-Starfleet ''Phoenix'', ''Groumall'', or ''Kaplan F17'' class, for example - does require a fiction proposal, it is ''also'' part of the squadron system. Such a ship has a squadron strength of 1. Members should make sure they have the available squadron strength before submitting this sort of fiction proposal. Typically, these concepts take the form of 'independent traders,' usually with a roguish undertone and drawing on themes akin to the TV show ''Firefly'' or Star Wars ships like the ''Millennium Falcon''. If you are unsure if your concept is covered by the squadron system, please reach out to the Intelligence Office. Other 25th-century concepts, such as a different Federation non-Starfleet setting or a Klingon warship, do not fall under the squadron system.
'''Eos Station''' is a [[Watchtower Class|''Watchtower''-class]] station that is located on the Federation-Romulan border.  


For guidance on a proposal for a RPG, which includes any writing with other members, please read [[Guide:RPG Proposals|this guide]]. A more in-depth summary of the different kinds of writing you can do in BF can be found [[Introduction to Bravo Fleet Writing|here]].
==Summary==
Commissioned in the year 2293, shortly before the signing of the Khitomer Accords, the Watchtower-class Eos Station was a military outpost along the Romulan Neutral Zone. Charged with gathering intel on the Romulans, defense of the Federation borders, and keeping tabs on our Romulan neighbors, Eos Station was the best of the best. Equipped with all the latest technology of the day, Eos Station was a shining beacon for the Federation.


Proposals are necessary to ensure that stories outside of the norm of BF writing are possible but nevertheless adhere to canon policy and the spirit of Bravo Fleet writing. The primary story of BF is Starfleet in the 25th century. So we prefer to hear what writers intend with more unusual tales, where they might be the first to write in a specific era or area, or to demonstrate they’re familiar with the already-established fleet canon.
Following the Tomed Incident in 2311, the Romulan Star Empire entered a prolonged period of total isolation. In that time, politics changed, people changed, and the Federation’s needs changed. Once a part of the old guard, Eos was relegated to an overequipped, unimportant outpost along a border of the Federation that seemingly no longer mattered. Over the following decades, Eos fell into disrepair due to her low priority status. 2400 was the year that changed everything for Eos Station as the collapse of the Romulan Star Empire of Rator and de facto Romulan civil war changed the landscape once again. Revived and brought back to life, Eos Station is called upon again to serve the borders of the Federation, this time opposite Romulan space from the Romulan Free State, as well as many other unknown independent Romulan factions all vying for control.
==Creating a Proposal==
Proposals are made on BFMS through the ‘Command’ section when you are logged in. Simply press the ‘Add Command’ button at the top as you would when you applied for your primary command. Until your proposal is accepted, you only need to fill the ‘Command Proposal’ section of the form.


A fiction proposal for a non-Starfleet setting or based in a different era does not need a registry entry selected (that will be created later if your proposal is successful). You should specify any information about a relevant ship, including name and class, in the proposal.
==Layout==
==Premise==
Every proposal should include a quick explanation of the story premise. This does not have to be vast; one or two paragraphs will often suffice. It should explain the basic concept, the setting, the era, and the purpose of the story. Remember that this is being written for the Intelligence Office’s consideration, not a public audience. The purpose is to explain your concept clearly and fully, not lure in a prospective reader with teasing suggestions.


A proposal should also include at least one quick mission summary. You don’t have to commit to writing it, but you should be able to describe the sorts of stories you would tell with this fiction. Again, this is for the Intel Office to assess your proposal; it’s preferable to explain how you might write the resolution of a story’s conflict, instead of writing it like a TV guide teaser. This does not have to be a point-by-point summary but should demonstrate you have a grasp of what stories you will tell.
====Primary Hull====
Eos Station features a typical 23rd-century Federation design, consisting of a saucer-shaped primary hull with a central command tower and four main docking bays capable of servicing Constitution-class starships or smaller. Positioned halfway down is an external docking wheel, while the energy reactor housing and multi-spectrum array are located at the bottom of the station. The command tower houses the shuttlebays, medical center, support offices, and an impressive two deck operations center. Support facilities, crew quarters, and crew accommodations are also housed within the primary hull. Phaser arrays are evenly distributed around the station's exterior.


Historical stories can only be set within an era that has been depicted or explicitly discussed in Trek canon. This excludes, for instance, anything from the founding of the Federation to the era of TOS/early Discovery. The world-building requirements for such stories go beyond the scope of a fiction proposal. Remember that historical stories are still set within Bravo Fleet canon.
==== Secondary Hull====
The secondary hull of Eos Station predominantly houses cargo and maintenance facilities, along with the energy reactor and multi-spectrum array mount. Maneuvering thrusters, lifeboat ports, and weapon platforms are situated on the external hull of the secondary section.


A historical fiction on a Starfleet ship can use any starship class appropriate to that era, unless it is restricted by your rank. For example, a TOS-era fiction can use a Constitution-class ship. But a Dominion War-era fiction cannot use a ''Sovereign''-class ship unless you already hold the rank of Captain. Historical fictions are not an opportunity to bypass rank restrictions on classes. You do not have to use ships which already exist in the registry, and can even request a ship of the same name but a different class to one in the registry - so long as the registry ship had not yet been built in that era.
===='''Terrestrial Enclosure'''====


If you wish to write a non-Starfleet ship, please specify the class of ship, or give some details if it would need a whole new one. We do not want you to write a whole new class proposal, merely a brief description of the class’s purpose and role. The Intel Office will request elaboration if necessary.
Tucked away within the primary hull of Eos Station, the biodome (as the locals call it) is a self-contained habitat. Its lush landscape is programmed to echo Napa Valley, California on Earth, complemented by an artificial sky programmable to simulate day and night. Affectionately known as "Eden," the Terrestrial Enclosure contains a thriving meadow, a high-speed tram, an athletic field, and a small commercial and residential district, among a variety of other amenities and establishments.
==Activity==
The proposal should mention the expected level of activity. This is not a hard-and-fast rule and can, in fact, be quite lax or slow, such as one story a month. We ask for this so we can tell if a fiction has gone inactive. If you fail to write as often as stated in your proposal, you will be contacted by the Intel Office to check if you are still using the command. The activity commitment can be renegotiated at this point if necessary, and if you are still interested in writing.


If you consistently do not meet the agreed activity level, the command may be deemed inactive at the Intelligence Officer's discretion. If you transfer to the Reserves, either by request or through inactivity, your fiction will be closed. You must contact the Intelligence Office upon returning to an active Task Force to discuss restoring a closed fiction. Such restoration will happen at the IO's discretion.
==Promenade==
==Command Description==
The station houses a multi-level business district, Promenade. This area is positioned just below the docking ring and contains a assortment of businesses able fulfill even of the pickiest of shoppers. Often referred to as a city within a city, the Promenade District features some of the best shopping and eating establishments in the galaxy.
While you do not need to fill in the Command Description section of the form, feel free to do so if you think it will help you demonstrate your premise and proposal. Please still use that section as you would if the proposal were accepted and this became the public page of your fiction.


If you have any further questions about your proposal or how to begin writing one, please contact the Intel Office! It’s okay for writing the proposal to be a discussion; while the Intel Office does not want to receive an unfinished work in progress, feedback is more likely than an outright rejection. Don’t worry about getting it perfect first time.
====Club 504====
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Club 504, the  nightlife destination on Eos Station, is owned and operated by the mysterious Lon Tik, a Human with a fondness for the finer things in life. This club offers an unparalleled experience for patrons from all corners of the galaxy. Nestled within the crowded confines of Eos Station, Club 504 is the  premier establishment for those needing a little night life entertainment.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
====The Quantum Brew====
[[File:Gencraft image 1710272487563-1.png|thumb|alt=]]
 
 
 
 
 
Tucked away in the docking ring, The Quantum Brew is a place of warmth and comfort. The aroma of freshly roasted beans fill the air, inviting patrons to take a temporary pause from their travels. The decor is a rustic charm, with holographic displays of celestial bodies decorating the walls with traditional Bolian tapestries. The owner, a cheerful Bolian named Tuvor, is always ready with a friendly smile and a hot cup of the Nebula's Nectar, a signature blend he ''claims'' was inspired by none other than Admiral Janeway herself.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
==== The Scottish Tap ====
[[File:The Scottish Tap.jpg|left|thumb]]
 
 
 
Upon stepping in, one is immediately drawn to the cozy feel of a traditional tavern, steeped in Scottish heritage. The gentle glow of the lighting further enhances the intricate wooden enhancement that decorate the establishment. Comfortably arranged seating invites guests to settle in and relax, while an impressive bar takes center stage, offering an expansive array of beverages to choose from. Neatly organized rows of bottles adorning the shelves behind the bar showcase a diverse selection of spirits and liquors. A charming touch of rusticity is added by the prominent display of cigar boxes atop the bar, subtly alluding to a culture of indulgence and convivial gatherings. The owner, Haggis McCreery, invites you to The Scottish Tap
 
 
 
==Support Craft ==
 
===='''Assigned Vessel'''====
 
*USS Galileo NCC-52004 Support Vessel (Steamrunner-class)
 
===='''Runabouts'''====
 
*Sadat, Research (Danube-class Runabout)
*Mandela, VIP Craft (Danube-class Runabout)
*Akaar, Patrol (Volga-class Runabout)
*Patel, Patrol (Volga-class Runabout)
 
In addition to the support vessel and runabouts, the station also houses several Type 11 and Type 14 shuttle crafts for diverse purposes, along with cargo management units and workbees.
 
==Crew==
*Commanding Officer - Captain [[bfms_char:71721/|Elena Mitchell]]
*Executive Officer - Commander [[bfms_char:69732/|William "Gab" Harris]]
*Captain of Engineering -  Captain [[bfms_char:46390|Eli Bates]]
*Chief Medical Officer - Lieutenant Commander [[bfms_char:97053/|Emily Rodriguez]]
*Chief Operations Officer - Lieutenant [[bfms_char:97064/|Jessica Chan]]
* Chief of Security - Lieutenant Commander [[bfms_char:97058/|Jason "Obi" Reynolds]]
*Chief Counselor - Lieutenant [[bfms_char:97062/|Rebecca Morgan]]
*Chief Science Officer - Lieutenant Commander [[bfms_char:97060/|Michael Turner]]
*Shuttlebay Manager - Lieutenant [[bfms_char:97056/|Sarah Turner]]
*Captain's Yeoman - Chief Petty Officer [[bfms_char:36559/|Reagan Byrne]]
==Recurring Characters==
*Crew Family - Captain [[bfms_char:97067/|Peter Mitchell]]
*Owner, Club 504 - [[bfms_char:35763|Lon Tik]]
*Owner, The Scottish Tap - [[bfms_char:45132/|Haggis McCreery]]
*Owner, The Quantum Brew - Tuvor
===Notable Crew===
====Commanding Officers ====
*[https://bravofleet.com/command/58810 2401 - 2401] : [[bfms_char:58890|Captain Granth Krajj]]
*2401: Captain [[bfms_char:71721/|Elena Mitchell]]
 
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Revision as of 01:23, 21 March 2024

Starfleet









Watchtower.jpg
Eos Station
Information
Registry DS-108
Class

Watchtower

Affiliation

Starfleet

Status Active
Commissioned 2293
Location
Quadrant Beta Quadrant
Assignment
Role

Diplomatic Outreach

Task Force Task Force 47
Task Group Task Group 13
Personnel
Commanding Officer Captain Elena Mitchell
Executive Officer Commander William "Gab" Harris
Template:Starbase
"I had my choice of any job in the fleet. I didn’t want some cushy job …I wanted this. The farthest reaches of the galaxy. One of the most remote outposts available. This is where the adventure is. This is where heroes are made. Right here… in the wilderness."
    —Julian Bashir, 2369


Eos Station is a Watchtower-class station that is located on the Federation-Romulan border.

Summary

Commissioned in the year 2293, shortly before the signing of the Khitomer Accords, the Watchtower-class Eos Station was a military outpost along the Romulan Neutral Zone. Charged with gathering intel on the Romulans, defense of the Federation borders, and keeping tabs on our Romulan neighbors, Eos Station was the best of the best. Equipped with all the latest technology of the day, Eos Station was a shining beacon for the Federation.

Following the Tomed Incident in 2311, the Romulan Star Empire entered a prolonged period of total isolation. In that time, politics changed, people changed, and the Federation’s needs changed. Once a part of the old guard, Eos was relegated to an overequipped, unimportant outpost along a border of the Federation that seemingly no longer mattered. Over the following decades, Eos fell into disrepair due to her low priority status. 2400 was the year that changed everything for Eos Station as the collapse of the Romulan Star Empire of Rator and de facto Romulan civil war changed the landscape once again. Revived and brought back to life, Eos Station is called upon again to serve the borders of the Federation, this time opposite Romulan space from the Romulan Free State, as well as many other unknown independent Romulan factions all vying for control.

Layout

Primary Hull

Eos Station features a typical 23rd-century Federation design, consisting of a saucer-shaped primary hull with a central command tower and four main docking bays capable of servicing Constitution-class starships or smaller. Positioned halfway down is an external docking wheel, while the energy reactor housing and multi-spectrum array are located at the bottom of the station. The command tower houses the shuttlebays, medical center, support offices, and an impressive two deck operations center. Support facilities, crew quarters, and crew accommodations are also housed within the primary hull. Phaser arrays are evenly distributed around the station's exterior.

Secondary Hull

The secondary hull of Eos Station predominantly houses cargo and maintenance facilities, along with the energy reactor and multi-spectrum array mount. Maneuvering thrusters, lifeboat ports, and weapon platforms are situated on the external hull of the secondary section.

Terrestrial Enclosure

Tucked away within the primary hull of Eos Station, the biodome (as the locals call it) is a self-contained habitat. Its lush landscape is programmed to echo Napa Valley, California on Earth, complemented by an artificial sky programmable to simulate day and night. Affectionately known as "Eden," the Terrestrial Enclosure contains a thriving meadow, a high-speed tram, an athletic field, and a small commercial and residential district, among a variety of other amenities and establishments.

Promenade

The station houses a multi-level business district, Promenade. This area is positioned just below the docking ring and contains a assortment of businesses able fulfill even of the pickiest of shoppers. Often referred to as a city within a city, the Promenade District features some of the best shopping and eating establishments in the galaxy.

Club 504


Club 504, the nightlife destination on Eos Station, is owned and operated by the mysterious Lon Tik, a Human with a fondness for the finer things in life. This club offers an unparalleled experience for patrons from all corners of the galaxy. Nestled within the crowded confines of Eos Station, Club 504 is the premier establishment for those needing a little night life entertainment.




The Quantum Brew



Tucked away in the docking ring, The Quantum Brew is a place of warmth and comfort. The aroma of freshly roasted beans fill the air, inviting patrons to take a temporary pause from their travels. The decor is a rustic charm, with holographic displays of celestial bodies decorating the walls with traditional Bolian tapestries. The owner, a cheerful Bolian named Tuvor, is always ready with a friendly smile and a hot cup of the Nebula's Nectar, a signature blend he claims was inspired by none other than Admiral Janeway herself.




The Scottish Tap

The Scottish Tap.jpg


Upon stepping in, one is immediately drawn to the cozy feel of a traditional tavern, steeped in Scottish heritage. The gentle glow of the lighting further enhances the intricate wooden enhancement that decorate the establishment. Comfortably arranged seating invites guests to settle in and relax, while an impressive bar takes center stage, offering an expansive array of beverages to choose from. Neatly organized rows of bottles adorning the shelves behind the bar showcase a diverse selection of spirits and liquors. A charming touch of rusticity is added by the prominent display of cigar boxes atop the bar, subtly alluding to a culture of indulgence and convivial gatherings. The owner, Haggis McCreery, invites you to The Scottish Tap


Support Craft

Assigned Vessel

  • USS Galileo NCC-52004 Support Vessel (Steamrunner-class)

Runabouts

  • Sadat, Research (Danube-class Runabout)
  • Mandela, VIP Craft (Danube-class Runabout)
  • Akaar, Patrol (Volga-class Runabout)
  • Patel, Patrol (Volga-class Runabout)

In addition to the support vessel and runabouts, the station also houses several Type 11 and Type 14 shuttle crafts for diverse purposes, along with cargo management units and workbees.

Crew

Recurring Characters

Notable Crew

Commanding Officers