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This guide lays out writing a proposal for a Bravo Fleet fiction, as per the [[Canon Policy#Section 4 - Fiction|Canon Policy]]. Please note that is not relevant for requesting a primary command, which any member can automatically request upon reaching the rank of Lieutenant Commander. Nor is this relevant for an additional 25th-century Starfleet ship, which members can request under the [[Command Policy#3 - Squadrons|squadron system]] upon reaching the rank of Captain. This guide is for requesting a fiction about a ''non-Starfleet'' story in the 25th century, ''or'' a fiction set in a different era of Trek canon. Members are eligible for these fictions from the rank of Commander.
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The '''''Challenger''-class''' '''light cruiser''' is a capable and maneuverable mid-sized starship developed as part of the [[Fleet Modernization Program (2340s)|Fleet Modernization Program]] that led to the [[Galaxy Class|''Galaxy''-class explorer]]. Being one of only a few Starfleet vessels designed with its warp nacelles aligned vertically rather than horizontally, this capable but unusual class was developed as a partnership between the Advanced Starship Design Bureau and the Andorian Imperial Guard. Because of Starfleet's shift towards vessels with a more tactical bent following the Battle of Wolf 359, the ''Challenger'' was only built for twenty years, from 2350 to 2370, but she remains a modern and capable design.


=== Science and Exploration===
Please note that while a small civilian ship - a non-Starfleet ''Phoenix'', ''Groumall'', or ''Kaplan F17'' class, for example - does require a fiction proposal, it is ''also'' part of the squadron system. Such a ship has a squadron strength of 1. Members should make sure they have the available squadron strength before submitting this sort of fiction proposal. Typically, these concepts take the form of 'independent traders,' usually with a roguish undertone and drawing on themes akin to the TV show ''Firefly'' or Star Wars ships like the ''Millennium Falcon''. If you are unsure if your concept is covered by the squadron system, please reach out to the Intelligence Office. Other 25th-century concepts, such as a different Federation non-Starfleet setting or a Klingon warship, do not fall under the squadron system.
As a light cruiser, exploratory duties are part of the ''Challenger''<nowiki/>'s standard mission profile. While she lacks the expanded capabilities of her contemporary, the ''Springfield''-class science vessel, a band of lateral sensors wraps around the middle of the ship, from the rim of the saucer to the stern, which allows her to carry hundreds of individual scientific instruments. In addition, the ship features an oversized sensor dome on the underside of the saucer, which can carry anything from heavy-duty planetary sensors to heavy-duty probe deployment systems. With the youngest members of this class now over thirty years old, ''Challenger''-class vessels are generally kept to low-priority surveys and exploratory duties within the vast interior of the Federation. Their relative luxury compared to newer vessels, however, is making them increasingly popular as exploratory support vessels for larger expeditions.  


===Diplomacy===
For guidance on a proposal for a RPG, which includes any writing with other members, please read [[Guide:RPG Proposals|this guide]]. A more in-depth summary of the different kinds of writing you can do in BF can be found [[Introduction to Bravo Fleet Writing|here]].
Initially deployed in tactical roles during the Federation-Cardassian War, the ''Challenger'' was used widely during the Dominion War and in later decades as a diplomatic courier, because of her high top speed and comfortable facilities. Even in the early 25th century, they are used both to transport Federation envoys and to serve as transports for races who do not have adequate interstellar transportation of their own. While they do also have conference facilities aboard, more often their purpose is to take diplomats to negotiations, rather than to host those negotiations onboard. This class is frequently selected for missions that are beyond the capabilities of a [[California class|''California''-class vessel]] (which is much slower) but do not require the attention of an emissary-type vessel like an ''[[Ambassador Class|Ambassador]]'' or ''[[Obena Class|Obena]]''.


===Engineering===
Proposals are necessary to ensure that stories outside of the norm of BF writing are possible but nevertheless adhere to canon policy and the spirit of Bravo Fleet writing. The primary story of BF is Starfleet in the 25th century. So we prefer to hear what writers intend with more unusual tales, where they might be the first to write in a specific era or area, or to demonstrate they’re familiar with the already-established fleet canon.
Very unusual for Starfleet ships, the ''Challenger''-class has its nacelles arranged vertically rather than horizontally. In addition, these nacelles are slightly off-center from one another, which makes them more efficient at higher speeds than other ships, though inefficient at lower speeds. These warp nacelles are proportionally large compared to the ship's hull and can propel the ship at speeds similar to their much larger contemporaries, the ''Galaxy'' and ''Nebula''-classes. Impulse power is provided by a pair of engines located on either side of the saucer adjacent to the long, thin secondary hull.  
==Creating a Proposal==
Proposals are made on BFMS through the ‘Command’ section when you are logged in. Simply press the ‘Add Command’ button at the top as you would when you applied for your primary command. Until your proposal is accepted, you only need to fill the ‘Command Proposal’ section of the form.


The warp core is an enhanced version of the core developed for the ''California''-class utility vessel, which is much larger than those found on other medium-sized vessels of this era. Unlike the ''California'', though, the Challenger can easily exceed warp nine, thanks to her hardened struts and large warp coils. The core is further forward than those found on most vessels, both to balance the center of gravity for orbital operations and to provide the core with easier egress for ejection procedures. It is located directly aft of the main bridge, spanning the entire height of the primary and secondary hulls. A horizontal power transfer conduit goes aft from the center of the core until it splits at the center point of the secondary hull into twin vertical conduits to transfer warp plasma to the nacelles.  
A fiction proposal for a non-Starfleet setting or based in a different era does not need a registry entry selected (that will be created later if your proposal is successful). You should specify any information about a relevant ship, including name and class, in the proposal.
==Premise==
Every proposal should include a quick explanation of the story premise. This does not have to be vast; one or two paragraphs will often suffice. It should explain the basic concept, the setting, the era, and the purpose of the story. Remember that this is being written for the Intelligence Office’s consideration, not a public audience. The purpose is to explain your concept clearly and fully, not lure in a prospective reader with teasing suggestions.


Maintenance needs for this class of ship are above average for a vessel of her size, balanced between engines that need constant fine-tuning and other primary systems that are less complicated. The unique engine arrangement presents challenges for engineers used to a more traditional configuration.  
A proposal should also include at least one quick mission summary. You don’t have to commit to writing it, but you should be able to describe the sorts of stories you would tell with this fiction. Again, this is for the Intel Office to assess your proposal; it’s preferable to explain how you might write the resolution of a story’s conflict, instead of writing it like a TV guide teaser. This does not have to be a point-by-point summary but should demonstrate you have a grasp of what stories you will tell.


Shuttle and cargo facilities aboard the ''Challenger'' are well-equipped and occupy most of the hump-like fairing on the dorsal surface of the secondary hull. The shuttle bay is on the stern with clamshell doors that can accommodate small craft up to the size of a runabout, though the ship itself typically only carries personnel shuttles. Many vessels of this class retain their original [[Type-7 Personnel Shuttle|type-7 personnel shuttles]], as they are very useful for diplomatic transport duties because of their combination of luxury with a compact frame.
Historical stories can only be set within an era that has been depicted or explicitly discussed in Trek canon. This excludes, for instance, anything from the founding of the Federation to the era of TOS/early Discovery. The world-building requirements for such stories go beyond the scope of a fiction proposal. Remember that historical stories are still set within Bravo Fleet canon.


===Tactical===
A historical fiction on a Starfleet ship can use any starship class appropriate to that era, unless it is restricted by your rank. For example, a TOS-era fiction can use a Constitution-class ship. But a Dominion War-era fiction cannot use a ''Sovereign''-class ship unless you already hold the rank of Captain. Historical fictions are not an opportunity to bypass rank restrictions on classes. You do not have to use ships which already exist in the registry, and can even request a ship of the same name but a different class to one in the registry - so long as the registry ship had not yet been built in that era.
''Challenger''-class vessels were developed during the height of the Federation-Cardassian War when Starfleet's ''Miranda''-class fleet was proving to be insufficient to meet the challenge presented by ''Galor''-class destroyers. While the [[New Orleans Class|''New Orleans''-class frigate]] saw a larger production run and is more commonly known as a major player in resolving this conflict, the ''Challenger'' is a faster and more heavily armed tactical platform. The class has two forward torpedo launchers in the upper nacelle pylon and two aft launchers on the stern, which allow her to excel at hit-and-run attacks, blinding enemies with torpedo salvos and closing to deal pin-point strikes with her phaser arrays.  


Because of her engine arrangement, the ''Challenger'' is not only very maneuverable at impulse speeds, but its handling characteristics are quite different from other Starfleet vessels of the same size. This novelty makes her both an exciting challenge for new flight controllers, but also a surprise for threat vessels unfamiliar with her capabilities. Indeed, many Starfleet historians and flag officers maintain that wider production of this class during the 2350s and 2360s would have substantially reduced the attrition seen during the Dominion War among classes like the ''Miranda'' II.
If you wish to write a non-Starfleet ship, please specify the class of ship, or give some details if it would need a whole new one. We do not want you to write a whole new class proposal, merely a brief description of the class’s purpose and role. The Intel Office will request elaboration if necessary.
==Activity==
The proposal should mention the expected level of activity. This is not a hard-and-fast rule and can, in fact, be quite lax or slow, such as one story a month. We ask for this so we can tell if a fiction has gone inactive. If you fail to write as often as stated in your proposal, you will be contacted by the Intel Office to check if you are still using the command. The activity commitment can be renegotiated at this point if necessary, and if you are still interested in writing.


While the ''Challenger'' has received several rounds of upgrades over the decades since production on the class ended, the design is showing its age, and its tactical systems are now quite modest by 25th-century standards. Even still, a ''Challenger''-class starship makes an excellent component of a starbase's defensive screen or as a patrol vessel in lightly populated areas, as she is more than capable of driving off average raider or pirate vessels. Her top speed is also still relatively high, which makes her a good candidate for advanced reconnaissance duties to support newer and more tactically capable vessels.
If you consistently do not meet the agreed activity level, the command may be deemed inactive at the Intelligence Officer's discretion. If you transfer to the Reserves, either by request or through inactivity, your fiction will be closed. You must contact the Intelligence Office upon returning to an active Task Force to discuss restoring a closed fiction. Such restoration will happen at the IO's discretion.
==Command Description==
While you do not need to fill in the Command Description section of the form, feel free to do so if you think it will help you demonstrate your premise and proposal. Please still use that section as you would if the proposal were accepted and this became the public page of your fiction.


===Shipboard Life===
If you have any further questions about your proposal or how to begin writing one, please contact the Intel Office! It’s okay for writing the proposal to be a discussion; while the Intel Office does not want to receive an unfinished work in progress, feedback is more likely than an outright rejection. Don’t worry about getting it perfect first time.
Life aboard Challenger-class ships is comfortable and generally without much excitement. They have similar accommodations to Galaxy-class ships, given their role as a first impression for the Federation in diplomatic situations, which means access to holodecks and other recreational facilities. Most of them have been retrofitted with shipwide holographic projectors and their medical facilities are oversized and more capable than other small ships. Crews aboard these vessels tend to be relatively junior, especially their captains, as they’re not often sent on assignments without direct supervision by a senior diplomat or admiral.
 
In addition to their diplomatic role, they are often chosen by flag officers as transports within Federation space, when it is assumed that they will not need to engage in any command and control responsibilities. They are often also assigned as support ships to larger starbases, given their low crew requirements and lack of utility for exploratory missions.
 
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==Class History==
Like the other vessels developed during the Fleet Modernization Program, the design process for the ''Challenger''-class light cruiser began in the 2340s. This vessel was envisioned as a solid generalist that could step into any of the roles then filled by the ''Miranda'' II and ''Constellation,'' while also relieving the ''Excelsior'' class from some of its tactical and diplomatic functions. ''Challenger'' was slated to prototype the full-size version of the nacelles that were to be built for the ''Galaxy'' and ''Nebula'' projects—and which would also be retrofit to the existing ''Niagara'' and ''Freedom'' classes in due course. In addition, it was the only member of its generation to test the largest version of the pre-''Galaxy'' primary hull: convex on both the dorsal and ventral faces to maximize total internal volume. As the program evolved, Starfleet made tactical survivability one of the top priorities for this design.
 
The Advanced Starship Design Bureau saw an opportunity to create something entirely new, as the requirement to test both of those systems would require significant deviations from the norm to handle such large nacelles without becoming so wide as to be excluded from the docking bays of the ''Spacedock'' II-class station which was then in widespread production across the Federation. The ADSB partnered with the Andorian Imperial Guard, as the Andorians had explored many hull configurations over the centuries to settle on lean, efficient, and tactically proficient designs. During a three-year design process, the combined ADSB-Andorian team settled on a vertically stacked arrangement of two nacelles, a configuration seen very rarely in prior classes like the ''[[Akula Class|Akula]]'' of the 2280s. While many at Starfleet Command preferred the ''New Orleans''-class frigate (some because of its more tested design but others on purely aesthetic grounds), the ''Challenger''<nowiki/>'s design was quickly approved out of deference to the Andorians.
 
''Challenger'', ''Buran'', and ''Atlantis'' were laid down in 2347 at the Procyon Fleet Yards orbiting Andor. The ''Buran'' was chosen somewhat ironically by the Andorians, because of its name ("Snowstorm"), over other names that would also tie the class prototypes to ''crewed'' space shuttles. Construction proceeded swiftly, with all three prototypes launching in 2350. Following a year of shakedown cruises with these three ships undertaking scientific, tactical, and diplomatic missions, they were commissioned for full service and the class entered production. Unusually for Starfleet vessels, construction of this class was almost entirely handled by a single shipyard, Procyon Fleet Yards, which was both an olive branch to the Andorian government for co-sponsoring the design and because other shipyards were now fully taxed with producing components for the upcoming ''Galaxy'' and ''Nebula''-class vessels. The narrowness of the production chain would prove to limit the Challenger's overall reach across the fleet, but the Andorians lobbied for a ten-per-year order. Starfleet Command approved this, skeptical that they could reach those levels of production, but Procyon was stubbornly committed to delivering these ships, and by 2355, there were 43 vessels of the class in service.
 
Joining their cousins, now including the ''Cheyenne'', ''New Orleans'', and ''Springfield'', on the Cardassian Front, the ''Challenger'' was seen as an exceptionally valuable tactical platform, but its speed and luxury were quickly identified as being bonuses for diplomatic missions, too. This class helped the Federation prove to the Cardassians that their new shipbuilding program would quickly leave the Cardassian Union in the technological dust, as the eventual launch of the ''Nebula'' and ''Galaxy'' were no secret. Along with her peer classes, the ''Challenger'' represented a level of engineering achievement that was leaps and bounds past the ''Miranda'' II she was replacing.
 
When the Federation-Cardassian War ended in 2366, the ''Challenger'' class was quickly absorbed in Starfleet's next conflict with the Borg at Wolf 359. There, one of the original ships of the class, Buran'','' was destroyed by the Borg with the loss of all hands. Given the astonishing losses Starfleet faced during this battle, no design flaw was identified with the class itself, but it would still mark the beginning of the end for her production line. Convinced by hawkish members of Starfleet Command, a preference for heavily armored and tactically geared vessels changed the landscape of starship orders immediately following this battle. Ironically, the Andorians (who had long argued for Starfleet needing to have real warships) were able to continue production of "their" class for another few years to finish out production in 2370. By this point, 193 ''Challenger''-class vessels had been built and 190 of them remained in service after only three hull losses, including ''Buran''.
 
''Challenger''-class vessels in the early 2370s were often assigned to patrol duties, but they were quickly reassigned into primarily diplomatic and scientific roles when the hardened ''Akira'' and ''Norway''-class vessels entered more widespread service. Indeed, they were quite popular as transports for diplomats and ambassadors because they retained the creature comforts of other vessels of their generation that were beginning to be phased out of the leaner vessels of a Starfleet gearing up for defense. When the Dominion War broke out, Challenger-class starships served in the mainline fleet and in support roles. Many of them were used as ambulance vessels, with their high top speed allowing them to transport the wounded out of battle zones back to starbases. While they suffered losses, their survivability was much higher than the antiquated ''Miranda'' II-class vessels still being used as frigates.
 
Following the Dominion War, the ''Challenger'' class received its first mid-life upgrades, and Starfleet considered resuming production on the class to help shore up the fleet's numbers, but it was ultimately decided to instead continue building ''Norway''-class light cruisers. As of the start of the 25th century, the youngest ''Challenger''-class light cruisers are now over 30 years old, but they are expected to remain in service until at least 2450. With newer and faster light cruiser designs now in service, the class is increasingly relegated to a support role, but the upgrades they have received over the decades allow them to continue to serve with distinction. While unusual, the ''Challenger''-class light cruiser remains a capable and well-respected design.
 
==In Play==
 
*This class of starship is not as flashy or as capable as her larger cousins from the same era, namely the ''Galaxy'' and the ''Nebula'', but rather is a small cruiser now suitable mainly for courier missions and limited exploration. This class of ship is ideal for a starbase support ship (either formally as a support vessel for a station command or as its own command set operating close to a base) or another role in which it is not expected to be independent for long periods of time.
*Fans often consider the ''New Orleans'' to be a tactically inclined vessel, but the ''Challenger'' is objectively better armed. It's also very maneuverable and would give many pirates a real surprise if they attacked. Still, there are many threats that a ''Challenger'' captain would need to run away from, with tactical systems designed before ''The Next Generation'' even started.
*This class would be a good starter ship for a character's first command. Old but not completely antique, it's reasonable that a Lieutenant Commander or Commander might be assigned to captain such a vessel, especially for missions within Federation space. The vast majority of these ships serve quietly and without much fanfare, performing the milk runs that keep Starfleet going behind the scenes.
 
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This guide lays out writing a proposal for a Bravo Fleet fiction, as per the Canon Policy. Please note that is not relevant for requesting a primary command, which any member can automatically request upon reaching the rank of Lieutenant Commander. Nor is this relevant for an additional 25th-century Starfleet ship, which members can request under the squadron system upon reaching the rank of Captain. This guide is for requesting a fiction about a non-Starfleet story in the 25th century, or a fiction set in a different era of Trek canon. Members are eligible for these fictions from the rank of Commander.

Please note that while a small civilian ship - a non-Starfleet Phoenix, Groumall, or Kaplan F17 class, for example - does require a fiction proposal, it is also part of the squadron system. Such a ship has a squadron strength of 1. Members should make sure they have the available squadron strength before submitting this sort of fiction proposal. Typically, these concepts take the form of 'independent traders,' usually with a roguish undertone and drawing on themes akin to the TV show Firefly or Star Wars ships like the Millennium Falcon. If you are unsure if your concept is covered by the squadron system, please reach out to the Intelligence Office. Other 25th-century concepts, such as a different Federation non-Starfleet setting or a Klingon warship, do not fall under the squadron system.

For guidance on a proposal for a RPG, which includes any writing with other members, please read this guide. A more in-depth summary of the different kinds of writing you can do in BF can be found here.

Proposals are necessary to ensure that stories outside of the norm of BF writing are possible but nevertheless adhere to canon policy and the spirit of Bravo Fleet writing. The primary story of BF is Starfleet in the 25th century. So we prefer to hear what writers intend with more unusual tales, where they might be the first to write in a specific era or area, or to demonstrate they’re familiar with the already-established fleet canon.

Creating a Proposal

Proposals are made on BFMS through the ‘Command’ section when you are logged in. Simply press the ‘Add Command’ button at the top as you would when you applied for your primary command. Until your proposal is accepted, you only need to fill the ‘Command Proposal’ section of the form.

A fiction proposal for a non-Starfleet setting or based in a different era does not need a registry entry selected (that will be created later if your proposal is successful). You should specify any information about a relevant ship, including name and class, in the proposal.

Premise

Every proposal should include a quick explanation of the story premise. This does not have to be vast; one or two paragraphs will often suffice. It should explain the basic concept, the setting, the era, and the purpose of the story. Remember that this is being written for the Intelligence Office’s consideration, not a public audience. The purpose is to explain your concept clearly and fully, not lure in a prospective reader with teasing suggestions.

A proposal should also include at least one quick mission summary. You don’t have to commit to writing it, but you should be able to describe the sorts of stories you would tell with this fiction. Again, this is for the Intel Office to assess your proposal; it’s preferable to explain how you might write the resolution of a story’s conflict, instead of writing it like a TV guide teaser. This does not have to be a point-by-point summary but should demonstrate you have a grasp of what stories you will tell.

Historical stories can only be set within an era that has been depicted or explicitly discussed in Trek canon. This excludes, for instance, anything from the founding of the Federation to the era of TOS/early Discovery. The world-building requirements for such stories go beyond the scope of a fiction proposal. Remember that historical stories are still set within Bravo Fleet canon.

A historical fiction on a Starfleet ship can use any starship class appropriate to that era, unless it is restricted by your rank. For example, a TOS-era fiction can use a Constitution-class ship. But a Dominion War-era fiction cannot use a Sovereign-class ship unless you already hold the rank of Captain. Historical fictions are not an opportunity to bypass rank restrictions on classes. You do not have to use ships which already exist in the registry, and can even request a ship of the same name but a different class to one in the registry - so long as the registry ship had not yet been built in that era.

If you wish to write a non-Starfleet ship, please specify the class of ship, or give some details if it would need a whole new one. We do not want you to write a whole new class proposal, merely a brief description of the class’s purpose and role. The Intel Office will request elaboration if necessary.

Activity

The proposal should mention the expected level of activity. This is not a hard-and-fast rule and can, in fact, be quite lax or slow, such as one story a month. We ask for this so we can tell if a fiction has gone inactive. If you fail to write as often as stated in your proposal, you will be contacted by the Intel Office to check if you are still using the command. The activity commitment can be renegotiated at this point if necessary, and if you are still interested in writing.

If you consistently do not meet the agreed activity level, the command may be deemed inactive at the Intelligence Officer's discretion. If you transfer to the Reserves, either by request or through inactivity, your fiction will be closed. You must contact the Intelligence Office upon returning to an active Task Force to discuss restoring a closed fiction. Such restoration will happen at the IO's discretion.

Command Description

While you do not need to fill in the Command Description section of the form, feel free to do so if you think it will help you demonstrate your premise and proposal. Please still use that section as you would if the proposal were accepted and this became the public page of your fiction.

If you have any further questions about your proposal or how to begin writing one, please contact the Intel Office! It’s okay for writing the proposal to be a discussion; while the Intel Office does not want to receive an unfinished work in progress, feedback is more likely than an outright rejection. Don’t worry about getting it perfect first time.